Yearning Comments

I really think that this poem is amazing!

Hello. I really liked this poem. Infact - all your poems because I did not see any technical errors. Keep it up.

This is your best poem.

Another good write - yearning is intrinsic to human nature.

I find this a good poetic definition of yearning which I think is true. Not all yearnings are fulfilled. Often they are lost or get blurred. You may follow up this sweet entry with a poem on dreams which come true.

Really speaks to you. Very well written

short but strong and shark. the meaning that this poem is carrying is so beautiful and charmer. also the poem it's self is nice, i like the paradox at the end line, that was awesome well done!