Thursday, December 3, 2009

Yearning Comments

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i wait
but no one comes
i see her
she doesn't see me
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corey latham
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Prince Obed de la Cruz 03 December 2009

very short but good...

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Seraphim Foxette 03 December 2009

Wow so many deep words in such a small poem! 10/10 that was great

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Seema Chowdhury 03 December 2009

nice poem, don't worry she will notice you one day. good luck. see my new poems too

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