Yearn Ye Yarn Comments

My imagination is working with this piece.

it is good for one to be in high spirit.

great mind.great spirits.grat words and great dedication.posted 10 surya

a rainbow is always a welcome sight... a balm for weary eyes and spirit

Nature's another phase is depicted well in this poem!

The poem describing the various scenes, right from dusk to dawn, highlighting on the top of all the rainbow scene is well composed.

Rainbow and clouds, very true

This piece has some sonorous metaphors and I loved the 'water-pearls kissing solemn meadows' - - lovely imagery throughout and deserves more than 10 - - best wishes from Fay.