Yearn Ye Yarn Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

Yearn Ye Yarn

Rating: 5.0


at dawn, some cantabile verses
which adorn magical effects
as droplets of water-pearls
kissing solemn meadows

in a middle bleakest-hollow sky
rain-tornado strongly brews
rumbling frantic clouds
returning very slowly

summer star’s sparkling brightly
through a depressed darkness
at last drawing wonderfully
a vivacious rainbow to us

(dedicated to a great poet at poemhunter, Ashes to Roses)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajaram Ramachandran 30 May 2009

The poem describing the various scenes, right from dusk to dawn, highlighting on the top of all the rainbow scene is well composed.

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Joseph Poewhit 30 May 2009

Rainbow and clouds, very true

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Fay Slimm 30 May 2009

This piece has some sonorous metaphors and I loved the 'water-pearls kissing solemn meadows' - - lovely imagery throughout and deserves more than 10 - - best wishes from Fay.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 06 June 2009

My imagination is working with this piece.

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Obinna Eruchie 02 June 2009

it is good for one to be in high spirit.

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Surya . 31 May 2009

great mind.great spirits.grat words and great dedication.posted 10 surya

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Sonya Florentino 30 May 2009

a rainbow is always a welcome sight... a balm for weary eyes and spirit

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Ramesh T A 30 May 2009

Nature's another phase is depicted well in this poem!

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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