at dawn, some cantabile verses
which adorn magical effects
as droplets of water-pearls
kissing solemn meadows
in a middle bleakest-hollow sky
rain-tornado strongly brews
rumbling frantic clouds
returning very slowly
summer star’s sparkling brightly
through a depressed darkness
at last drawing wonderfully
a vivacious rainbow to us
(dedicated to a great poet at poemhunter, Ashes to Roses)
This piece has some sonorous metaphors and I loved the 'water-pearls kissing solemn meadows' - - lovely imagery throughout and deserves more than 10 - - best wishes from Fay.
great mind.great spirits.grat words and great dedication.posted 10 surya
a rainbow is always a welcome sight... a balm for weary eyes and spirit
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The poem describing the various scenes, right from dusk to dawn, highlighting on the top of all the rainbow scene is well composed.