Ye Dard Comments

Nice but problem lies there //dard bhi ek ehsaas hai jo mujh ko mehsoos hota hai/ /kabhi kabhi tutta hai dil mera aur mujhe dard kaa utna hi ehsaas hota hai(dard ye kaisa ehsaas hai, mujhe jo mehsoos hota hai) done misre ek hi hain jara soncho mai ne likha hai try rightly going abhi samay hai insaan sikhta hai janam se maran tak koi umar nahi hoti siikhne sikhaane ki

thank youu sirrr for this compliment..

Bahut hi achhi nazm hai. likhte rahiye.