Yayati 4- Shukraacharya Comments
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I did an unending penance
To appease the heartless gods
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This part is quite interesting, and beautifully written...I am on my way to the fifth part...
Wonderful! Shukracharys had so much passion and kindness both. He was blinded by love for his daughter. He made his famous teaching about wine as destroyer of human wisdom. Human drama played so well through his character. Thank you for sharing this wonderful ancient story in most contemporary way.
Thank you Savita for reading the poems and posting the encouraging comments.
Your poems are beautiful. Intense in love, loss and the struggles. Your characters are so true to life. Wonderfully penned work.
Thank you Sarah, for the time you spent for reading the series, and then, posting the fantastic comments.
Once again the mysteries of mythology's great book Mahabharata is unfolded in beautiful poem. You have an art to bring forth the character to life transforming the readers to different era. Thanks for this beautiful master piece.10
Hi Aarzoo, Thank you for the lovely comment. It is really encouraging that you spent your precious time to read my poems and to write down such beautiful comments, that make my day. An when it comes from a great poet like Aarzoo Mehek, I am truly delighted.
Your Yayati is a great series of poems, worth of reading and rereading. Thank you for sharing such a wonderful work here!
A great write basing on the stories from the Mahabharat, .It teaches us many things regarding our social and human values, our perception of right and wrong, individual interest-ve, rses-social interest, how our love for family may jeopardize greater interest of the community how feeling of hate and revenge can bring down your own fall and the like..Your effort to write verse on the characters of Mahabharat and interpreting them is very commendable.
Hi Bharati, Thank you very much for the detailed comments on my poems. Yes, the scripts teach us a lot. But are we imbibing what is learned from them? Mahabharat and Ramayan are not just epics. They have immense relevance even in today's context. We should kindle the interest of the younger generations in these books. We should be able to inculcate in them the habit of reading and writing. (Not just texting?)
Wowww. full of incidents. The reader is thoroughly intrigued by the unfolding of dramatic events. Your narration is perfect. An epic tale of love, loss, revenge, miracle, wars, defeat, victory, etc. The action is fast n breathless n takes the reader on an adventure.
Dramatic and very touchy, honestly speaking I am reading an epic for the first time like this free verse, learnt a lot, very nice, how powerful the mrutanjaya mantra is, fantastic depiction, full credit you receive for this great effort, lovely work thanks for the share dear poet
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7/27/2025 5:08:12 AM # 1.0.0
Thank you. Really enjoyed reading this reinvigorating journey beyond the edge of life, so this, to me at least, makes a five of five