Yayati 3- Devayani Comments

How the sweet indulgence turned into a storm of rage, thank you for sharing this 5/5

Thanks for sharing the poem....

His ocean-blue eyes! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

I like the unfolding of the story...I am looking forward to the fourth part...

I have come to give you the ten I promised you when the server was down. Here goes.........

Nicely written enjoyed reading Thanks for sharing

So now I move to next poem to know!

Your magical words unfolded the myth and gave the readers a pleasure to Understand the mythological stories. Loved reading it. The narration and simply outstanding. Compliments for this great piece of work.10

I enjoyed reading your mythical poems. The exotic story was very attractive.

Wonderful narrative write. A gripping tale told in an enchanting way. I'm loving this series. The rhythm n the flow of verse is perfect.

Really u have the potential as a narrator, simple and intuitive way you have described such a mythical characters, awesome presentation, it's my pleasure to read and comment, thanks for the invitation, keep sharing, dear poet

I am so intrigued- I can barely stay long enough to make a comment before dashing off to read #4- - this is what we listened to eons ago around the campfire- -and you are a storyteller to weave these tales so beautifully and captivatingly.. a 10 when PH fixes that page! ! !

the Indian myths have beautifully alluded......by a high quality verse...... thanks......10 without hesitation.