Yayati 2- Kacha, The Outcast Comments

As i completed the series 2, i just jumped into the next series before commenting.that much simply and nicely you narrated it.

A fascinating tale from the Great Epic!

Beautifully written with your great story telling skills it unfolds capturing the imagination of the reader so vividly!

The more I read, it becomes more interesting and captivating...

Here I am to give you the 10 I promised many moons ago that the server thingee wouldn't allow me to give you at the time. So here I go to give you the 10 rating this deserves!

For the sake of his clan he cheated on his Guru and left his wife. Makes one question if serving the men in power at the expense of your loved one and revered one is worthwhile. Men in power don't belong to anybody but power. Great presentation.

She would die if i left! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Such are love's tragedies thus untold Which doth increase in pain growing old Past memories of wounds unhealed Remain green like monsoon paddy fields..... Here the disciple managed to cheat his Guru and get away (even if it be after a death and rebirth) ...however, Karna's tale is even more tragic with the curse that his knowledge would fail him when he needs it most....Great interesting poem Sir...

I am an outcast And cast out in the sea with no shores! The curse of love denied! ......... Brilliant! We'll eventually be the outcast of fate.

Well narrated. Particularly poetic are these which I liked most: Her frail body Every inch of which bore Marks of my lips, quivered I am an outcast And cast out in the sea with no shores! The curse of love denied!

This is the definition of epic! ! ! ! It is majestic, it is so very human in its appeal, it had that storyteller's asset- -want to readoon to see What Happens Nextm! ! ! ! ! ! ! Since the page to give you a 10 is not working at this time. I will return to try to give you a 10.

This poem is felt as the fresh wind rush and flow of mental light. interconnection of mantra, soul and body, sharp shame of bad deed and saint punishment. I enjoyed it! ! !

well depicted the epics, in a simple language and insight of the characters is a marvelous work, thanks for the share

Another intriguing tale. From the pinnacle of glory to the expulsion, the journey is not long. A thoroughly gripping write that relates the adventures of a man proud to be the chosen one, only to be an outcast in the end. A metaphor for life, this legend depicts the unpredictability of life.