Yasodhara Comments

Well conceived and nicely drafted from the heart. Lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing.

But you suddenly pull your hands out Calmness of your voice cut me into pieces when you declared salvation is your destination I could not believe my trust owe me fate of a roadside stone Now standing amid the road to salvation that filled with fear to love and to be loved to give and to accept to keep and preserve promises I am still searching a way to go back and hold you tight Because I know all pain ends if you have a shoulder to weep, Very very beautiful and well articulated.

Now standing amid the road to salvation that filled with fear to love and to be loved to give and to accept to keep and preserve promises I am still searching a way to go back and hold you tight Because I know all pain ends if you have a shoulder to weep A great stanza to finish up. Thanks for the poem, please keep the trend of writing up.

Wow..great.. You have chosen a very nice theme dear poetess. You have great poetic skills. You Wii be.after a few months appear as one of the most talked of poet! You deserve 10 for the poem.I'm glad to be the first one to rate your poem. I feel proud for it. I invite you to visit my page.Thanks poetess. Subhas