Wednesday, November 8, 2006

Yadokari: Hermit Crab, Okinawa Comments

Rating: 4.8

He borrows his house, as I borrow mine.
We are strangers where we live.

This little crab makes me think
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Eric Paul Shaffer
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Ilana Cofield 09 April 2007

I love the thought you put into this metaphor. It's fresh and original. I can especially related to the 2nd line. I often feel like a stranger in my world. I like the the first 2 stanzas the best. Very nice work.

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