Yad-E-Mazi Comments

Mazi agar khushnumaa ho to sari zindagi k safar mukammal nazar ate hain Mazi agar dard main beeta ho to har pal zindagi k kahin shunya k shitiz par nazar aate hain.. Wonderfully narrated......thank you for sharing :)

Ek shahkar nazm.......................10

Mirror of fast..Jis dunya ne mujhse tujhe begana kiya hay, Us duniya se pal bhar keliye ho kabhi bezar. A lovely tribute the best way to remind and rewind lovely

yes, very nice rhyming! :) bri thanks for sharing, even though i don't understand its meaning. i'll look at your translation later. this reminds me of a poem i wrote. let's see how long it takes me to find it in my list; i don't remember the title exactly. not too long. here it is. 123.... Shabu.....[Mystery language fun; Short] Shabu dawa linksplite tan pluverritsky, waw donar pli fasterfit Vinter smitsky. Tan bura sin plastekiter balka plivera. Sonnenfister tum corridar fandi estera? Pli tum wander stiperot. Con tilda solo...., vasten go snitsky voya tributen monobolo. Qintor splicken tan floradawa yanfolker, bin Cuskert sin balka fissenwallerspokar. (Jan.2013)

sorry Akhtar, i tried reading this. really i did! but i didn't get too far. ha ha. bri ;)