Thursday, August 24, 2017

Yachting Allure Comments

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All things are too difficult to do
As long as we think we can't do it.
With a patience to face the failures
And with a smile if we can undo it.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Oratile Diratsagae 11 May 2018

Sometimes we feel the beauty of your poems because of your unique thinking

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Oratile Diratsagae 11 May 2018

There is a wonderfull story behind. I loved it

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Valsa George 09 September 2017

I have started sailing in a beautiful yacht I am sure one day I shall arrive in an island Where there is beach of acrobat dolphins And a silky touch of wet silvery sand. A beautiful ending to a beautiful poem.......! Yes, much can be achieved with perseverance!

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Khalida Bano Ali 25 August 2017

A lovely message in a beautiful poem..............................................

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Rini Shibu 25 August 2017

Wow an excellent write Akhtar..have new start from lessons learned from failure And sure one day will arrive the island of silvery sand

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