Monday, July 16, 2012

Y..... Zebra Comments

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Zebra goes to drink
Crocodile jumps
Zebra escapes
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Aufie Zophy
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Valerie Dohren 17 July 2012

Kids never listen to their parents do they, and this is the consequence - lessons learnt the hard way. Very well penned.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 17 July 2012

thought provoking poem and well written!

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Unwritten Soul 17 July 2012

National geographic in poem hunter? ? ? hahahaha joking! well the lesson well learned from both documented write! :) _Unwritten Soul

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Heather Wilson 16 July 2012

Poor son Zebra, he should have listened to his dad, a clever write.

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