Monday, October 1, 2012

Y..... Unblind Comments

Rating: 5.0

Tonight,
I saw the nightly light
Creating a glorious sight
On a field of grass
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Aufie Zophy
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Jaya Das 18 February 2017

Yeah Well this is such a beautiful poem n its true sometimes we are so absorbed in our own world that we miss the glory Of some beautiful around, we become blind!

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Aoife Bridges 14 February 2014

love it very eel written check out my poem

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Sarrah Ibrahim 16 October 2012

Loving the optimism in this poem! Well written: }

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 16 October 2012

Dis poem is apreciative of d glory of God dat we tend to take forgrantd, so kudos poet 4 a splendid poem dat i add to my fav list

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Elena Sandu 14 October 2012

Thank you! I wonder if we are forced to keep the eyes closed. Otherwise, I suppose we could not survive in this world we may need to be half blind, in order to follow the society's rules and to keep in control we may have to chain our souls. Are the most heavy chains those braided with love? Maybe, would I have to learn the hard way as you say that love is only a chain of very light wings to fly with the winds? ! Your poems are always inspiring, love them dearly, thank you for share!

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Smoky Hoss 11 October 2012

Stunning words; such depth of meaning, and wisdom! One of my favorites indeed. Great work.

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Lyn Paul 08 October 2012

Thank you Hans, so beautifully written, You have touched many with your words. Have a Happy Birthday Too!

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Aung Si 06 October 2012

Good job! I feel something deeply from this poem.But words fail to express.Well done! ! ! ! !

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Eindaray Kyaw 05 October 2012

nice poem..you are at least lucky coz you realize yourself in time and that you should plea I wish may you be unblinded any more...Great job! !

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Kelvin Owusu 05 October 2012

John Lennon: Life is what happens to you while you're busy making other plans. this to me is a good read and write nicely done

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Valerie Dohren 02 October 2012

We are always so busy that we fail to observe what is going on around us at a deeper level - good write Aifie.

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Anita Sehgal 02 October 2012

what a beautiful prayer... we really are blind to the beauty of the world around.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 01 October 2012

the idea is superb! beautifully written!

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Spiritual Seeker 01 October 2012

Often a situation, the blind see and the deaf hears....because they see and hear with their hearts. Beautiful poem Hans! A 10.

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Heather Wilson 01 October 2012

A really great observation of life and the things we miss on the way, a lovely write.

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Unwritten Soul 01 October 2012

I really love this, you tell what i am feeling to myself right now, it seems like you know what i feel..and you tell this on behalf of me? ? ? i guess i have nothing more to say because what you say here is what i really wanted to tell.i love it..thanks Hans_Soul

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