Y/. The Wondrous Story Of Clara Comments

boring poem make readers certainly sick

I didn't read it all .... about halfway... it was a very interesting piece. I shall come back to it.

Those little clara...water droplets, the basis of life itself, in torrents, they gush and kills, other times, they gently wash and heals! Beautiful write Hans! ! A 10.

the advanture is sweet and fabulous.which shows us lot of messages.an understandable poem in really flowing lines. i agree with Valsa about the Einstein's law too. love it~nb

From begining to end I enjoyed the journey. I think we will all end up as bacteria in the soup.

The Alpha and Omega of a drop of water told in arresting narrative! This reminds me of man's relentless ride to join his origin and also of Eintein's law that energy can neither be created nor destroyed! Enjoyed this great story!

What a wonderfully imaginative story - I shall look out for Clara and Molly, maybe they will enter into my brain some day, though I think perhaps they will choose to remain in the ocean. Love this one Aufie, just great.

Amazing poem, i do love this poem and story very much...but then will Clara and Molly will enter somebody else brain sooner as other droplets too...or is it this time they enter to understanding other life like animal and plant as water always 70% of total mass in body and in this earth....lovely! _Soul

Each one of us though changes in the life's turn and spin / all the time yearns for going back to origin that's my response Aufie to this beautiful poem. Great write this tale in a poem!