Sunday, January 22, 2012

Y... The Story Of Why Comments

Rating: 4.7

There was once a one-year old boy
He was playing with a knife as a toy
He was having a real great time
How nicely did his lovely knife shine
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Aufie Zophy
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Unwritten Soul 06 February 2017

i remember this poem vividly in my mind, one of the poems from you that i still remember....still loving it but why you removed all your poems and be someone different

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Hans Vr 06 February 2017

I don't understand the last line, Soul. What do you mean?

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Soulful Heart 03 February 2012

thoughtful, engaging, happening..............thanx

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 03 February 2012

Great poem Hans, as always your poem is thought provoking, making us to try to solve mystries of the Why? somethings God, realised they were better hidden from us and our tiny minds..thanks my friend.

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Lawrence H 31 January 2012

good poem for pondering the question WHY? There are many things in the universe have no answers to questions WHY? Only God know...which beyond human's power and imagination or capacity to find the reasons for every events happen on this earth or in the universe..

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Galeigh Parkin 28 January 2012

Enjoyed your poem Aufie. Perhaps at times, we do not have to accept what is happening. As for example, the father changed the knife incident. Perhaps eliminating a danger unknown to the son.The future holds mysteries.

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Pheko Motaung 28 January 2012

After reading this thought provoking poem I became a better human being.Thanks for enlightening me.

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Richard Jarboe 26 January 2012

I think your sense of what is deserves recognition. Good job, ric

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Jinal Oswal 24 January 2012

You are a great poet.. the most difficult thing for a human is to understand that everything happens for some good there is something in God's mind... a very beautiful example, I have no words to tell you what I am feeling.. A great poem.

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 23 January 2012

truth is said truely. we have no reason when the undesired happen or the desired fail to happen

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Elena Sandu 23 January 2012

Yes there is a reason behind everything and our minds are too small to understand or know the whys..Of course for the nature's happenings we can't say a word, we'd never fight, yet many victims are because of Human stupid pride..the fight for greed or power I would also love to try to end abruptly..Just as you took the knife from treasured kids away I would love to stop the tools that harms our world.. Great poem, I agree with every word thank you for share,10

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Patti Masterman 22 January 2012

Yes, nobody knows the reasons and something seen as good from angle is desperately evil from another..so has been the way with the world since dim time..

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Sara Fielder 22 January 2012

This poem is great from start to finish. Thank you for sharing.

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Unwritten Soul 22 January 2012

Why oh Why, tinted with beautiful handcraft is Why i am being here to read this Why story...Sometimes why could lead us a way to find an answer, but why and why could lead us away from any answer...it's how we accept the why without why-ing always hahaha..it's true we always think we are big enough to understand, if like you said, a father dont give his son play a knife because of love...will we understand if we wanted something and ask for HIM but we never get it...because He loves us and know more than us...love more than fathers do, coz He create us...to whom want to believe about existence of Him, like i do_Unwritten Soul

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Spiritual Seeker 22 January 2012

Excellent...a beautiful poem also steep in spiriritual reasons of things happening in life! You sound like a sufi...God bless you Hans. Great 10+++ from this humble reader.

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