Saturday, June 21, 2014

Y/. The Light Comments

Rating: 5.0

I have traveled in the dark
With only glimpses of light
Now and then a spark
As my one and only guide
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Aufie Zophy
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Roseann Shawiak 03 August 2014

Yes, when you finally see the light nothing else seems to matter, it pulls you, entices, and lures you into it's depths of brightness. Very energizing and you never want to veer from it's course again. Brilliant insight into the darkness that lies within all of us.

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Joseph Anderson 06 July 2014

You saw the light, he saw the light, no more sadness, no more fight. An excellant poem about a problem many will face

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Heather Wilkins 02 July 2014

the light dwells within each f us. look and one will find. a lovely write

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Francis Wanyiri 02 July 2014

Nice piece. I like it.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 28 June 2014

I am sure you handled things right. Unconditional love is the way to go. Thank you.

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Hazel Durham 28 June 2014

The light can be found within us all, to guide us on the sometimes hard road and unconditional love is the brightest light of all! Excellent write!

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Valerie Dohren 25 June 2014

Teenagers are usually difficult creatures, but eventually emerge from their chrysalis as decent human beings - good luck Hans.

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Valsa George 24 June 2014

At times we feel lost... stumbling in the dark! On such moments, from somewhere we see glimpses of light... If we focus on it, we might be led by a clear stream of light... Let us hope that everything will be Okay ! Enjoyed!

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Unwritten Soul 22 June 2014

hope he can discover as much as you have seen..though now i only use my left hand but it always right_Soul

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