Friday, May 17, 2013

Y/. The Golden Key (A Sonnet) Comments

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One day, I want to melt all gold on earth
And make a wonderful key with it all
This special key of incredible worth
Will be fit to unlock your heart and soul
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Aufie Zophy
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Anifowos eniola 18 December 2020

Wonderful

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Ezekiel michael 04 May 2020

Wow wonder poem. I like to travell in underneath the earth’ Solem with my four corner box’

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LIEZEL 26 October 2019

I WANT TO KNOW HOW TO BE A MEMBER OF A SONNET

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Hans Vr 26 October 2019

Not sure what you mean. If you want to write a sonnet, a lot of info about it is freely available on the internet.

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Eloquent Blessing 04 December 2018

I love i see an heard,and i want to be a professional poet.

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Geetha Jayakumar 20 March 2017

A Beautiful sonnet with an incredible key to open all the heart and soul. Beautiful message. Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing.

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Jaya Das 07 February 2017

A lovely sonnet....Yeah the two lines are full of hope If we dream of a universe full of love We all can get d golden key of love Thank you for this dear friend

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Terry Craddock 04 January 2017

Love Can Open Pearl Gates Heaven a golden heart is the key to love love can open pearl gates heaven love can extinguish fires in hell Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'Y/. The Golden Key' by the poet Aufie Zophy. Dedicated to the poet Aufie Zophy.

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Terry Craddock 03 January 2017

a golden heart is the key to love :)

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Valerie Dohren 02 June 2013

Excellent sonnet - very well written.

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Captain Cur 31 May 2013

Very well crafted with a deep uplifting message.

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David Wood 25 May 2013

I like your sonnet very much, have you read any of mine?

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Spiritual Seeker 22 May 2013

Each one of us holds a little golden key...if only we start unlocking the doors that block the light and barriers between people.....a big 10 for a beautiful sonnet.

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Adeline Foster 18 May 2013

Lovely sonnet written in Iambic pentameter. So often sonnets on this site ignore that requisit. Read mine - Sonnet Beyond Love - Adeline

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Unwritten Soul 18 May 2013

Lovely...golden key, where to get that pure gold and fine it to unlocked hearts If i could i will make it using a core of light that penetrate even to the soul and break the curse of the darkness..beautiful sonnet Aufie_Soul

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 17 May 2013

A lovely sonnet . of course its a lovely one, who will not like it? melting within to outside up there from heaven /

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