Sunday, November 6, 2011

Y... The Breeze Comments

Rating: 4.5

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A warm welcoming wind
embraces me with endless caress.
The pores of my skin inhale
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Aufie Zophy
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Igor Balatsky 23 January 2012

It is so exciting – becoming a wind for a while.) May your floating be always light-winged!

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Ken E Hall 15 November 2011

Sounds like a perfect massage by nature with a perfect end line...regards

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Walterrean Salley 12 November 2011

It’s amazing the affects that nature has: to purge, cleanse and transform. Here, the wind is like a positive entity - cleansing and imparting inspiration, wherein you find yourself pleasantly rapture. Very well presented. 10

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