Y..... The Balloon Comments

when i read this poem it touchs my heart

I love this poem. I would never go to the trouble of getting a sea into a balloon, but I’m glad YOU did! I also am not usually a fan of “love poems”, but I’ll make an exception this time. I’m also a big fan of rhyming. bri :) p.s. here is my version of the sea of love: bri's sea of love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love fishes Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love

Beautiful love poem...............!

You reminded me of two lines from an Urdu poet, Jigar Muradabadi- - - - Ek lafz-e-muhabbat ka adna yeh fasana hay Simte to dil-e-aashiq phaile to zamana hay (It's a short story of the word love, when converges becomes heart of a lover. when diverges becomes an universe. A great poem...................10

Awesome! A nice romantic poem.

Such a cute, lovely poem... :) Wonderfully written!

awesome so so so sweet Auie sea of love, to never end ..Amen

awesome piece. I enjoyed. please check out my works too. Thanks

A perfect way to end in a sea of love transported in a blue balloon fairy tale ending for true love...regards

so romantically piece of written. tnx for sharing

Yes..I do agree with Ellias..the balloon in your poem is so amazing!

This balloon must be a perfect experiment. and it shows that how kind and sweet you are to your wife well done dear

Wow super cool poem with love burstin balloon! Enjoyd soo much. I hope u read my other cments. Thanx 4 yors.

so beautiful sir loved your style short and sweet........so good............it is simply elegant in its simplicity

I agree with you sea of love has no end that you have been able to pick up. master write.

A great metaphor for love-simplisticly beautiful and I love your brevity in creating this- Wow! would not any wife appreciate this

I love this poem, it's more than a ten! Sweet and very relaxing, soothing! Swimming into a blue sea of love, now, thank you!

Such sweet poetic words, wonderful!

So nice! A beautiful poem on love.Thanks for sharing.

Inside the ballon the crimson feelings swirl the love filled inside it, let it goes high will never fall never less than sky tall climb the air toward the end and the sea of love will reach it but if it explode one day we all will never dry again showered by the love eternally By our red balloon as a serene moon ...continuity inspired by Hans_Soul