Sunday, October 7, 2012

Y..... The Balloon Comments

Rating: 2.4

I went to the sea of love, this noon
I took it and put it in a blue balloon

I brought this balloon, so blue
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Aufie Zophy
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blessings 29 September 2020

when i read this poem it touchs my heart

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Bri Edwards 01 May 2016

I love this poem. I would never go to the trouble of getting a sea into a balloon, but I’m glad YOU did! I also am not usually a fan of “love poems”, but I’ll make an exception this time. I’m also a big fan of rhyming. bri :) p.s. here is my version of the sea of love: bri's sea of love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love fishes Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love

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Dutendra Chamling 25 November 2015

Beautiful love poem...............!

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Akhtar Jawad 09 January 2015

You reminded me of two lines from an Urdu poet, Jigar Muradabadi- - - - Ek lafz-e-muhabbat ka adna yeh fasana hay Simte to dil-e-aashiq phaile to zamana hay (It's a short story of the word love, when converges becomes heart of a lover. when diverges becomes an universe. A great poem...................10

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Sankar Sehanabis 24 October 2014

Awesome! A nice romantic poem.

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Viti Kumaar 17 September 2014

Such a cute, lovely poem... :) Wonderfully written!

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 07 September 2014

awesome so so so sweet Auie sea of love, to never end ..Amen

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Francis Wanyiri 06 May 2014

awesome piece. I enjoyed. please check out my works too. Thanks

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Ken E Hall 23 October 2012

A perfect way to end in a sea of love transported in a blue balloon fairy tale ending for true love...regards

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Nader Baheri 22 October 2012

so romantically piece of written. tnx for sharing

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Eindaray Kyaw 19 October 2012

Yes..I do agree with Ellias..the balloon in your poem is so amazing!

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 17 October 2012

This balloon must be a perfect experiment. and it shows that how kind and sweet you are to your wife well done dear

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 17 October 2012

Wow super cool poem with love burstin balloon! Enjoyd soo much. I hope u read my other cments. Thanx 4 yors.

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Yash Shinde 16 October 2012

so beautiful sir loved your style short and sweet........so good............it is simply elegant in its simplicity

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Ramesh Rai 16 October 2012

I agree with you sea of love has no end that you have been able to pick up. master write.

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Joseph Anderson 14 October 2012

A great metaphor for love-simplisticly beautiful and I love your brevity in creating this- Wow! would not any wife appreciate this

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Elena Sandu 14 October 2012

I love this poem, it's more than a ten! Sweet and very relaxing, soothing! Swimming into a blue sea of love, now, thank you!

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Smoky Hoss 11 October 2012

Such sweet poetic words, wonderful!

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Neela Nath Das 09 October 2012

So nice! A beautiful poem on love.Thanks for sharing.

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Unwritten Soul 08 October 2012

Inside the ballon the crimson feelings swirl the love filled inside it, let it goes high will never fall never less than sky tall climb the air toward the end and the sea of love will reach it but if it explode one day we all will never dry again showered by the love eternally By our red balloon as a serene moon ...continuity inspired by Hans_Soul

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