Saturday, June 23, 2012

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I passed by a group of three girls
While I was walking all alone
The most beautiful one had curls
And was busy talking on the phone
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Aufie Zophy
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Juan Olivarez 13 July 2012

it is commonplace to use that word now a days. most people use it without thinking twice or what it really entails. great piece.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 04 July 2012

Aufie Zophie, Don't worry too much. she must have told that she hated BN/PR. a nice poem to read. Good.

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Valerie Dohren 25 June 2012

Hate is an unpleasant word, but is often used without thinking and is not really meant, but of course I agree that to hate is very negative. Good write.

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Captain Cur 24 June 2012

Perhaps she was the most beautiful girl with the ugliest mind. People who speak to the world while on the cell phone only speak with half dialogue. Noone is interested. Keep your private life, private! Good poem about daily life!

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Unwritten Soul 23 June 2012

In a short we should not also to easy interpret it..maybe her friends talking about a small thing like color of clothes or shoes and she's like i hate it...LOL, we dont know...but you are right we are should never live in hatred...to hate or being hated, this thing are related...we are hated because we are hating, we hating because we hated something...otherwise, change it to love and respect! _Unwritten Soul

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