Y.. Reality Comments

The light of life has opened the writers eyes to see beyond what appears to be the bad end, to show the true reality. Very enjoyable poem.

Reality, a real poem... Fantastic, written well. So optimistic with a positive energy.

Great, interesting, good structure..meaningful and optomistic..i like it! -SG

Reality, actually having two things in one...The object and the shadow, i guess if we see positiveness someone see it's shadow of negativeness...that pessimistic it's about pro and cons... but the successful person will look even negative things, shadowed by positive meaning, good to be optimistic...Life and reality is about how we see and interpret it.. and you have Optimistic mind, such a good one :) _Unwritten SOul