Thursday, September 1, 2011

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One second ago or even less
A thing flashed through my mind
A thought it was, I guess
It was particularly unkind
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Aufie Zophy
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Unwritten Soul 19 September 2011

This is vibrant color that not found in rainbow...I mean, to be positive we will find something more inspiring and to be thankful of everything we will live in blessing so the both things exist in this writing then i have to say this is a vibrant color from your mind(poem) .Nice writing friend_Unwritten Soul

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Vipins Puthooran 06 September 2011

Very thoughtful poem.. only who can make our choice for good is God..In your every poem there is a room for God.. I think you praise God so deeply..I thank u in the name of God..wonderful poem.

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Louis Rams 05 September 2011

TOUCHE! fantastic decision.

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Malaya Roses 02 September 2011

Yes, the poet was writing his winning part with sufficient understanding about the victory in kindness itself and manage to cut the roots of bad grass. Excellent and provocative poem! ! !

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