Sunday, May 27, 2012

Y.... Man Became Men (Written Together With Unwritten Soul) Comments

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Man became men

Once Man was whole
And then just as
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Aufie Zophy
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Jinal Oswal 30 July 2012

Its a true call for humanity.. Everything everything that we see, we think and we can ever imagine is covered.. Lovely lovely poem... Great picture of togetherness, I wish people learn from this understand what it means.. Thank you both of you for this wonderful poem.

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Neela Nath Das 01 June 2012

Amazing.Thus you two show togetherness.Novelty of thought.

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Eric Cockrell 29 May 2012

a call for humanity to be human.... we've raced through life looking for eternal glory, forgetting the eternal moment of each moment aware... and as both of you say... forgetting the call to be a man(or woman) ... an amazing write... thank both of you!

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Unwritten Soul 27 May 2012

I chuckled a little for you as you keep....... in each stanza hahaha, Hans, Thanks for inviting me to write a passionate poem with me, and this is not a poem for each of us. Clear visionary and honest opinion is what i treasure when working with you Hans, I cant wait for a time to write one more poem for my page soon. keep inspiring us, you know you are a man among the men and for this you need to stand, dont be man just to join men...Millions thanks for your trust on me to write this with you...Enjoy all for what Hans wanted to tell_Unwritten Soul

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