Y..... Light Delight Comments

Captivating imagery, mirroring the luscious beauty of Nature! !

My first visit to the page turned worthy enough after reading this poem, what is described so beautifully is felt on the pulse, even short and long line-arrangement, alternate-rhyme, and the triplet endings -all worked together to make the imagery of the fascinating nature...enjoyed the work! ! !

Hi... So beautifully written can really feel it.. Always love to read your poems.....

I love the imagery i read and see the nature in the lines

it is so beautiful. thanks for sharing your composition.

it is so beautiful. thanks for sharing your composition.

from where you create such enchanting words Sheer and wild delight Flows through my veins Pushing firmly aside Any sorrow or pains love to read dear

So so beautiful...I can feel it in my vein, missing Bachok...wish i am there now! Huge 10.

A very beautiful and descriptive poem Aufie, love the imagery.