Thursday, August 18, 2011

Y.. Intimate Freedom Comments

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Intimate freedom?

So many people go on with the most intimate act
Shortly after they met, after the first contact
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Dutendra Chamling 25 November 2015

Aufie Zophy! Beautiful poem 'Intimate Freedom'. Thanks for sharing here.

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Joseph Anderson 02 January 2014

Amen to what you put forth in this poem. Sadly, not to many heed these warnings. Well done, straight forward and right. so right. A worthy write

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 19 August 2011

nice. the last two lines shrewdly written. shan

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Louis Rams 18 August 2011

you hit the nail on the head, think about what you do before going to that bed. there may be a child that you conceive, when you turn around and leave.

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