Thursday, January 19, 2012

Y... In The Dark Of The Night (Poem About Hope, Hope, Hope)) Comments

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It is dark, no moon, no light
Just darkness, a starless sky
The wind blows, the waves break
A single firefly passes by
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Aufie Zophy
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me poet yeps poet 19 February 2021

Soon the firefly is gone Leaving me in the darkest of nights The tiny fly made me anticipate A sunrise with the finest of lights S MANY R WAITING FR U GET OUT FROM THE DARKNESS INTO BROAD DAY LIGHT MANY WILL SEEE AND READ YOU O POET

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Sylvia Frances Chan 27 May 2020

The tiny fly made me anticipate A sunrise with the finest of lights........................Marvelous! Finest write!

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Prabir Gayen 02 March 2019

Soon the firefly is gone Leaving me in the darkest of nights The tiny fly made me anticipate A sunrise with the finest of lights...fine poem

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Naila Rais 09 November 2018

Nice one...... ....

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Novita Baromea 28 October 2018

wow, , beautiful. thanks for sharing

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carter zing 22 August 2018

beauty and love and moving

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Jachindra Kumar Rout 06 August 2018

Poem is beautiful but is it reflecting approaching of good times.certainly

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Philippa 28 April 2018

Its so nice ..very moving and gives hope

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Luwisa 17 March 2018

Beautiful poem

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fatima 16 March 2018

nice poem aufie zophy

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Sona Wilae 16 December 2017

The tiny fly made me anticipate a sunrise with the finest of lights. So many metaphorical gems in this entire stanza. Hope is found in the smallest creatures created by a matchless creator.

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Gourav 09 December 2017

Nice poem by Zophy

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Binayakumar Mohanty 22 October 2017

The tiny fly made me anticipate sunrise with finest of lights.Nice feeling.and composition.I loved the poem dear sir.Thanks for sharing.

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Sixtus Unfailingdreams Osim 22 October 2017

This just the best of telling someone to not give up. Thanks, Aufie.

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Franel Kibe 17 October 2017

wow.it so encouraging

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Tom Allport 07 August 2017

a wonderful poem of being in the dark until seeing the light of hope? ..................well written.

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Arundass Tp 03 July 2017

I love how you placed a single firefly in the entire frame of darkness. good poem

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Cheryl Tutaan 21 May 2017

Barely simple, yet bountiful hope...Thank you...

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Josey Alfred 19 May 2017

Sure a firefly, a speck of light, may inspire hope and patience even in the most desperate situation. Simple and inspiring. Thanks for sharing.

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Hebert Logerie Sr. 16 January 2017

This poem is light, short, and sweet. Great job my fellow Libra. You and I are October babies.

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