Monday, July 23, 2012

Y..... Ice And Vapour Comments

Rating: 4.9

A hard start of the day
A loud quarrel with my son
Yes, a real hard start today
Puberty seems to go on and on
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Aufie Zophy
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Valsa George 17 August 2012

A wonderful poem! How warmth and forgiveness can dispel all the gloom and melt the rocky ice! ! Teenage being a time of storm and stress, we as parents have to excercise great restraint. Thank you for the nice comments! !

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Spiritual Seeker 26 July 2012

What a wonderful poem for ramadan.....a great 10! ! ! !

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Heather Wilson 23 July 2012

Add more warmth and kindness seems to be the answer to many problems, such a fantastic write with a wonderful message, pleased all worked out well in the end.

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Unwritten Soul 23 July 2012

Warm is always in the box of heart...it can warming cold bond, it able to cold burning emotion, always be like water sometimes, it buffering temperature...we are human, sometimes the coldest thing can freeze water, and too hot can boil our patience...and faith and wise are what we need to look for. Love will touch everything perfectly, sometimes teenager release angry too much but as the older we must ready to cool them with love and understand...so Hans, just remember when you at same age..we did some mistakes right...it's time to them to learn and learn for yourself how your great mom teach you...with love and patience..wisdom around_Unwritten Soul

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Valerie Dohren 23 July 2012

Stunning Aufie, really lovely and a great message contained therein.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 23 July 2012

a wonderful theme and it is well written! Nice!

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