I write 4 myself most of all....., and
I write 2 keep my brain on the ball.
I write 2 amuse myself and maybe U.
I write when I can't think of something better 2 do.
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I hate to criticize but why didn't you substitute the number for the words in the last couplet and make it: I hope I can write 4 as long as I'm able 2 breathe....., 2 make a joke, send some news, or a long story weave. Nice rhyme and sentiment. A solid ten.
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I hate to criticize but why didn't you substitute the number for the words in the last couplet and make it: I hope I can write 4 as long as I'm able 2 breathe....., 2 make a joke, send some news, or a long story weave. Nice rhyme and sentiment. A solid ten