Y/ Heart Of The Monsoon Comments

So beautiful and the rhyming too. I love monsoon...cooler. Its dry in Belgaum now. Great 10.

It depicts a vivid picture...a highly metaphorical poem

Beautiful scenes of monsoon! It is raining almost everyday in KL now! well done!

Oh dear, I am inlove now! With one delicate beauty: the night! With laughing waves and a shy cloud! This is more than a craft it feels it as a real gift of life, thank you!

Amazing imagery, so beautifully written!

It sounds like you were in the middle. So clear picture.

Beautiful description, a great write, I enjoyed the poem very much We just get floods here then more floods,

We don't have monsoons here in the UK, but this sounds very descriptive. Great poem.

We don't have monsoons here in the UK, but this sounds very descriptive. Great poem.

We don't have monsoons here in the UK, but this sounds very descriptive. Great poem.

Yeah when too hot we wish for the rain....then it mean actually we could feel that both are blessing for us...just the way they are in different time haha_Soul