Food for the body
I know of men, who do not have enough,
Lacking food and drink, their life is rough
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needed to fin a couple of poems about food for my english a-level, and this by far has to be the best one, so much to write about it. very well done!
Your poetry is food for the heart! Nice rhyme scheme too......lovely in its simplicity.
A really fantastic poem, the greed of man can Destroy everything. A great write.
Such an amazing poem, u caught so well these aspects of life. No matter how much we' ll try to be better humans, these three aspects of life will coexists..Cristina Teodor
Brilliant! ! Great poem to keep at heart and live by it, thank you! ! I am so sorry I cannot give any marks, I clicked on ten several times but doesn't seem to come up.
A wonderful poem ! Thank you very much this is great poetry I really appreciate your lion hearted effort.
Hans you did a wonderful job with this one. I am surprised you had only 9 on your vote. You deserve double of 10. I think I will stay with you and read all your works. You are an observer, which I do. We are together.
A triangle of life: Body, Soul, and Mind and you reveal all their need, a food but different goods...but after all each run and attached to each other...Healthy body come from Mind and it shaped by soul...No matter how much body eat, if mind feed ego it poisoned soul later it creating hatred flesh...When soul feed well but body eat less mind go slow...A triangle of life need healthy body with soulful and sober mind to work as human...hahahahaha what am i talking about: P but it really related :) _Unwritten Soul
There's all kinds of people in the world, but may we choose to pattern after the good examples. Also, I wish many would bring more attention to hunger. Poverty is a real problem in today's world. Fine job. Great food for thought, Hans. Thanks.
My God! This poem is so beautiful! There are so much wisdom in it. Give and share if you want to be happy and satisfied with your life. I love every line of this poem.
Exactly you have said, some are dying for want of food and some are dying for an endless game. The third one can save the above two.
You wrote the man-kind strength and weakness into an open mind poem. You are telling the truth in our endless-greed in sleek way and become comprehend-able by the reader. Excellent! ! !
One who seeks knowledge and wisdom..will find peace and happiness. Beautiful poetry my friend. Great 10.
Every one in this world has to eat to survive such as animals, grass, trees, Poetry is food for our soul