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A flying fish was flying,
Flying too high, flying too far
Ending up on the beach
Gasping for water
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You have given a universal message through the symbol of a fish out of water, waters of love and divinity. when we fly out of this ocean our souls lie gasping on the rock of ego, it's inspiring piece of writing.
The basic essence of life is love...towards parents, neighbours, the poor, animals, nature etc...this ocean of love we must all sail, towards the source of all that love is...the Most Merciful..! ! Beautiful write, a great 10!
Wonderful poem with a wonderful message. This one is one of a kind.
The ocean of love is somewhere where all of humanity need to be. Great metaphor.
ocean of love. thanks. I like it. I invite you to read my poems and comment.
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8/3/2025 12:14:10 PM # 1.0.0
A very good lesson to be learnt here indeed with a clever twist from the start thanks for this...great...regards