Saturday, September 3, 2016

Y// Far Away Comments

Rating: 5.0

Somewhere far away,
in another galaxy,
there is a little star
that started to shine
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Aufie Zophy
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Susan Williams 09 September 2016

I am charmed by this thought- -a star shining with such peace and joy! ! ! That there could be a star coming our way is usually a thought filled with dread but you see such an advent as one of benevolence and to be awaited with joy! I think I shall join you in your optimistic view of such events- - Beautifully written, charming the reader with such on-targets words chosen, charming with such simple poetic structure, all poetic factors blend together seamlessly. Well done!

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Nosheen Irfan 09 September 2016

Such a lovely poem that brings so much comfort to the heart. It is always good to think that one day the light of love n peace will prevail in the world n humanity will benefit from this light.

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