Wednesday, July 18, 2012

Y..... Don'T Touch It Comments

Rating: 4.6

Have you seen a fire?
I mean a big one with high flames?
Any human touching it
Will suffer intense and lasting pains
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Aufie Zophy
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Walterrean Salley 03 August 2012

There is great depth here. And I love the way it unfolds. A very noble piece concerning morals. Good for all to read and learn.

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Marieta Maglas 31 July 2012

''Honesty love and kindness Are like a cool breeze on a hot day''-they are real spiritual values of the human kind.Your poem is a real message for the reader, Thank you for sharing it, blessings.Mari.

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Heather Wilson 21 July 2012

A fantastic poem, very wise, ... the last verse was just wonderful...., I really enjoyed the read,

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 20 July 2012

Yes, I agree with you. Teach them to be courageous to stand against the lies and ignorance. If a layman is ignorant, no one bothers, but someone who represents us politically, academically and in many other fields, not aware of simple principles of life, nature and science, we should have the courage to say it openly, instead of polishing their shoes silently. Good poem to read and follow! 10 marks

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Spiritual Seeker 20 July 2012

Words of wisdom and kind guidance, are like mountain streams...refreshing and a blessing for everyone! Thnx...a great 10.

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Kasia Fedyk 19 July 2012

Wonderful and very inspiring poem Aufie! Beautiful.

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Valerie Dohren 19 July 2012

Touch fire and you will get burnt - very wise words here, and a very good write.

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