Tuesday, November 10, 2015

Y// Dear Cloud Comments

Rating: 5.0

Dear Cloud,
When will you break your silence
When can I hear the story
of your unthinkable journey
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Aufie Zophy
COMMENTS
Edward Kofi Louis 16 February 2016

To praise the works of nature. Nice piece of work.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 November 2015

Well expressive poem so nicely presented. I like this poem very much. Thanks for sharing....10

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Seema Chowdhury 22 November 2015

An expressive and an engaging write, thanks for sharing

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Rahman Henry 10 November 2015

I've added this poem to MyPoemList and I like to rate it: 10++++++++++++

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Rahman Henry 10 November 2015

Well penned, wonderful poem; I really enjoyed a lot. Beautifully presented.....

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Unwritten Soul 10 November 2015

Dear Aufie, Coulds ask me to tell you Listen to the rain, it is a story by my tears Listen to the rain, everydrops are my fallen wish and dear Aufie Listen to the wind as it blows As it is a journey by me when wind push me to go now i tell all words from clouds to u hahahahahaha

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Hans Vr 28 November 2015

Dear Soul, There are so many types of clouds in our skies. We have the teary ones, the thundery ones, the cumulonimbi or towery ones, then we have the ones who keep changing shape and are so wonderfully silent and appear to be on an eternal journey. This poem was about that type of clouds. :)

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