Wednesday, March 26, 2014

Y/. And Now Comments

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Yesterday the world was cruel
And now it is kind

The day before yesterday the world was violent
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Aufie Zophy
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Terry Craddock 04 January 2017

Master Poet Aufie Zophy Wrote 'Y/. And Now' read profound wisdom poem which should have a thousand likes still hidden enfolded among multitude poems beautiful bliss days of fallen creation error till salvation blesses searching hearts Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'Y/. And Now' by the poet Aufie Zophy. Dedicated to the poet Aufie Zophy.

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Terry Craddock 03 January 2017

this is the poem which should have a thousand likes, still hidden enfolded among poems beautiful bliss, days of fallen creation error till salvation bless searching hearts

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Daniel Brick 25 May 2014

This is an amazing poem! And I mean that word (a tired, old, over-used word) in its full glory - A-M-A-Z-I-N-G - that is, an experience which opens up something closed, that releases something stalled, that fulfills something ready. You have made a prophetic poem that carries its own conviction. It's as if you reversed the SEVEN DAYS OF CREATION in Genesis, giving us a countdown in reverse to the world as it should be, a visionary world, a moral world, a world guaranteed to bring happiness to its inhabitants. I'm a believer! !

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Kirti Sharma 20 May 2014

with a positive hope for the change of the world.... nice

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Unwritten Soul 23 April 2014

To face reality we need to get ready with the real ugly, and learn how to cope it and we may learn new thing about something we call beauty_Soul

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Yash Shinde 08 April 2014

......I hope your vision comes true.........loved this write........bien

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Hazel Durham 07 April 2014

Beautiful write full of hope for a brighter and peaceful future!

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Spiritual Seeker 02 April 2014

Beautiful lines...reflection and optimism for the present world, speeding towards destruction! ! A good 10 my brother...

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Valerie Dohren 28 March 2014

A new reality as you describe would be wonderful Aufie - lets keep hoping! Very good write.

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