Yesterday the world was cruel
And now it is kind
The day before yesterday the world was violent
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this is the poem which should have a thousand likes, still hidden enfolded among poems beautiful bliss, days of fallen creation error till salvation bless searching hearts
This is an amazing poem! And I mean that word (a tired, old, over-used word) in its full glory - A-M-A-Z-I-N-G - that is, an experience which opens up something closed, that releases something stalled, that fulfills something ready. You have made a prophetic poem that carries its own conviction. It's as if you reversed the SEVEN DAYS OF CREATION in Genesis, giving us a countdown in reverse to the world as it should be, a visionary world, a moral world, a world guaranteed to bring happiness to its inhabitants. I'm a believer! !
To face reality we need to get ready with the real ugly, and learn how to cope it and we may learn new thing about something we call beauty_Soul
......I hope your vision comes true.........loved this write........bien
Beautiful write full of hope for a brighter and peaceful future!
Beautiful lines...reflection and optimism for the present world, speeding towards destruction! ! A good 10 my brother...
A new reality as you describe would be wonderful Aufie - lets keep hoping! Very good write.
Master Poet Aufie Zophy Wrote 'Y/. And Now' read profound wisdom poem which should have a thousand likes still hidden enfolded among multitude poems beautiful bliss days of fallen creation error till salvation blesses searching hearts Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'Y/. And Now' by the poet Aufie Zophy. Dedicated to the poet Aufie Zophy.