Y/. A Tough Ride Comments
As a traveller I have enjoyed time and again
The green leafy woods and shady paths therein
But this time, there were no woods in my sight
A travel through the desert seemed to be my plight
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'As a traveller I have enjoyed time and again The green leafy woods and shady paths therein But this time, there were no woods in my sight A travel through the desert seemed to be my plight' the beginning of journeys hiking travelling into nature are so often energetic energy buzzing moments of bliss, even hardship of journeys testing muscles mind can be a blessing, shaping character in a perservering mind
Beautiful poem..I will share this one with my friends on Facebook today..
In the desert I rise Stars my companion and guide Chilly night wind my music Horizon my imagination This last drop of water..my treasure! Beautiful write my friend...just recovered from my long illness.
Very descriptive, I was transported to the place and after all there was grassy land.
A tough ride indeed it was to be in the sweltering heat that had no mercy. The camel as your only friend and means of travel. Glad you did not see any mirages. We always had a saying beat the heat. You didn't beat it you joined it! Good write I like it.
Along with the poem I travelled thank for nice journey thnk
The desert is not a good place to be, either the geographical ones or those of the mind. Great write, enjoyed reading. Don't know if a metaphor was intended, but it works with one.
nicely written.. great imagery... wonderful travel with beautiful rhyming...
Great imagination goes on spontaneously.Nice picture of life's jouney is here. Wonderful rhyming scheme. I must give 10
I once went through the Negev desert on a camel called Golda. Your poem reminded me of that time. Lovely poem.
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Beginning Journeys Hiking Travelling the beginning of journeys hiking travelling into nature are so often energetic energy buzzing moments of bliss even hardship of journeys testing... muscles mind can be a blessing shaping character in a persevering mind ever constantly sight learning... Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'Y/. A Tough Ride by the poet Aufie Zophy. Dedicated to the poet Aufie Zophy.