Sunday, October 28, 2012

Y..... A Fool In Europe Comments

Rating: 4.7

A Norwegian fool
thought that it was cool
to kill girls and young men,
about eighty; imagine if you can.
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Aufie Zophy
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Joseph Anderson 28 November 2012

No news is often the best news. A thoughtful write with good advice. Why do we torture ourselves with all the grimness that is today? A little more poetry would suffice

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 15 November 2012

shutting eyes will not stop occurence. retaliation and punishment from societal force is the need of hour. your is lovely to read

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 04 November 2012

things like this happen everywhere, but in certain countries it is exposed. Aufie! you have protested for a cause!

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Sindiswa S. Mnguni C'ndy 02 November 2012

good write Zophy! WOW so much write though wish could reach that standard but slowly.... getting there. good thing. KIP ROWLIN'

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Spiritual Seeker 02 November 2012

Capitalism..greedism..powerism at all cost, even hiding the truth! That is the world today...nice topic you hav written! Thanks.

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Rekha Mandagere 02 November 2012

The last lines are witty: -) and it is really a thought provoking poem.

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Malaya Roses 01 November 2012

A beautiful words are remain lovely even though the topic is murder. Beautiful poem, my friend....

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Jac Harper 01 November 2012

I enjoyed both the message and the delivery of this poem. Agree :)

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 31 October 2012

Ah great rhymin splendid poem on a killer and repeat bad news. Lets pray 4 more gud news then. Thumbs up poet.

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Aung Si 31 October 2012

Wow! so so melodious poem with beautiful rhymes.I really appreciate not only the meaning but also the style of composing.Well done! ! ! ! !

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Dave Walker 30 October 2012

A fantastic poem, I think we all should join you.

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Asif Andalib 30 October 2012

An inspirational and uplifting write. Awesome

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Jahan Zeb 28 October 2012

So I invite you now to join me, not to look at news anymore on tv. All that time we will prefer to spend Sending inspiring emails to a friend! This is inspirational. I open a newspaper, read sport news and hand the paper over to another person. A habit for almost ten years. I loved you poetry. Very nice and nicely versed.

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Valerie Dohren 28 October 2012

Yes indeed, the news is always full of doom and gloom which is all very depressing. I am sure there are many good things which we never hear about - we need to strike a balance and believe that for every bad event there is a good one, perhaps there is really more good than bad - I hope so! A great write Aufie, very well penned.

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Elena Sandu 28 October 2012

Great poem, very true! I agree with each word, you spoke from my heart, thank you! Yes I try to avoid the tv news, also the newspaper for I got too tired of wars and crimes. Highest ten, thank you for writing this gem.

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