Thursday, May 30, 2013

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Rating: 5.0

A man was blind
‘cause he kept his eyes closed all the time
He had not seen any light
He did not believe in light
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Aufie Zophy
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Valsa George 25 June 2013

Open our windows and let light stream in, so that we will be able to look at life from a higher perspective and see things in greater radiance! Enjoyed this lovely write!

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Ambrosia A 11 June 2013

Wow, so insightful. Yes, its the self 'induced' blindness, deafness.......which disturbs our own soul and others also.

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R.j. Wynn 06 June 2013

That's the bomb! great structure.

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Valerie Dohren 04 June 2013

Simply put, but very true - we all need to have open minds and hearts. Good write Aufie.

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Chandra Thiagarajan 04 June 2013

A very inspirational poem to see every one living in harmony! BEAUTIFUL!

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Spiritual Seeker 03 June 2013

When the doors opened...the flood of goodness will flow in...beautiful write poet! A 10.

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Unwritten Soul 01 June 2013

Amazing and the idea of senses and inner-senses met by metaphorical arrangement...great work Hans! _Soul

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David Wood 01 June 2013

I agree with you. Some people need a wake up call. A lovely poem.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 01 June 2013

Wow i add dis to my fav, so eloquent and inspirational, yes we have to open our mind to see God and d light. Bravo poet.

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