The way she described that kiss...
with you...
The way you lied to my heart,
that was true...
...
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So pleased to read your work so far Kali and as has been said you have great freedom of expression in your poetry so you will find more to write about in time I am sure. the appeal is sincere in this piece - and keep writing...... best wishes from Fay.
Dear Kalli Abyss. You write with your heart. The poem says that you are a sensitive heart. I give it a 9..and I wait for you to send more poems, to showe your full talent (and trhen take a 10) . Keep working on various themes. You can soon achieve a lot of things. I am sure about this. Joseph S. Josephides Member of the International Society of Poets (ISP) ILP awarded
very nice mournful but hopeful...life continues.
Your poem is sad... It elicits some deep feeling. Thanks for sharing. Keep writing.