i'm not surprised that there are no comments here yet. some of my greatest submitted poems have had no comments as well. well, don't get me wrong! i'm not saying this is a great poem. i think i like it most (after 3? readings) when i don't try hard to make sense out of it. not sure what the wish is; is it stated in your poem sir?
i liked the hand/eye section especially.....though, again, i did not understand it. i want to look at one more of your poems, a few back on your list. thanks for YOUR comment today on my 'ph identity poem'. and you were
CLOSE, very close, about my name; it is Eon (not Ian) Brontosaurus Edwards.
thanks for sharing whatever it was you were sharing above. bri
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i'm not surprised that there are no comments here yet. some of my greatest submitted poems have had no comments as well. well, don't get me wrong! i'm not saying this is a great poem. i think i like it most (after 3? readings) when i don't try hard to make sense out of it. not sure what the wish is; is it stated in your poem sir? i liked the hand/eye section especially.....though, again, i did not understand it. i want to look at one more of your poems, a few back on your list. thanks for YOUR comment today on my 'ph identity poem'. and you were CLOSE, very close, about my name; it is Eon (not Ian) Brontosaurus Edwards. thanks for sharing whatever it was you were sharing above. bri