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all i have to say is well done, a nice piece of poetry

Fu-yo! ! Instantly reminds me of War Horse! ! !

i can feel the dying soldier.... somehow i see what he sees, hears what he hears... and in the end its not sadness but a sence of fulfillment... thats how well your written it. I have to say that this is my new favorite. well done :)