Sunday, August 14, 2011

X..... When We Silently Pray Comments

Rating: 5.0

Have you seen a crab on the beach,
Running towards the water of the sea?
That is how our brain feels
Getting closer to divine wisdom
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Aufie Zophy
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Sara Fielder 14 January 2012

It is so hard to nail that sense that we are actually connected to God in some way and that our communications are breaking through the veil, but you have done it here.

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Juan Olivarez 19 August 2011

That is one beautiful poem Hans, thanks for sharing. It is a ten.

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Louis Rams 18 August 2011

just one word! WOW

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Walterrean Salley 17 August 2011

Great analogy. Super-clear imagery. Powerful message. Very-well done. 10+

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Eric Cockrell 15 August 2011

deep with soirit and understanding!

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Spiritual Seeker 15 August 2011

Another of your nice spiritual poem...nice flow, enjoy reading them. Looking for moe in this Ramadhan mubarak. Thanks. A 10.

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