X - The Wives Of Charles Iii? Comments

AN AXIOMETIC STATEMENT FOR CERTAIN, GILLIAN..AND ONE EVEN SHARED 0'ER HERE, IN THE MAINFRAME OF ''HARD-HEARTS'', N.Y., USA! STELLAR WRITE...ANOTHER (10) ...TRES BIEN PLUMMIN'...Give it up frank! ''''''''''''''''''''''''~F. J. R.~''''''''''''''''''''''''''''

This poem shows a nice use of the triolet form, and you have good sense of rhythm and metrics. On the other hand, the archaic diction is a bit of a drawback for me. I suggest you use the voice and words you normally use when you compose your lines. I look forward to more of your poems.