Friday, August 12, 2011

X..... The Bird Comments

Rating: 3.8

A little bird is flying by
It lands here straight in front of my
So many questions in its eye
My soul is listening or at least would try
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Aufie Zophy
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Cigeng Zhang 31 October 2014

My brother captured, sister killed, can you explain in words? ”... I like the line. It brings us to think.

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Dickson Mseti 23 August 2011

Humans are so easy to regret but always so easir to forget.nice poem.

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Louis Rams 18 August 2011

the birds are gods creatures that took to flight, after raining for forty days and nights.

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Walterrean Salley 17 August 2011

There are so many Questions when it comes to life's vital issues, we humans are sometimes like the little bird in your poem. Can't deal with it. And in frustration, we simply avoid the issues, or 'fly' away.

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Eric Cockrell 15 August 2011

the smallest of cruelties is just as important as the largest.... all of life is sacred... the disease is within the ego! good poem!

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Spiritual Seeker 15 August 2011

Very interesting message....a v common happening in life...but life in all its mysteries will go on. Thanx for sharing. A 10.

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Malaya Roses 13 August 2011

This is a poem with a frustrated tone. Some effort and attempt to open up certain level of human might be ending with such disappointing result. Two parties could not understand each other will be a reason of total winning of insatiable greed, desire and rise of the misery and fear. Such a great reflection and well done! ! !

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