Saturday, March 26, 2011

X..... Snow Comments

Rating: 3.5

On my way home at night in the car,
I have to travel still a distance, quite far
Thick flakes in the sky causing some fear
praying for safety for me and my family, dear.
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Aufie Zophy
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Ramesh Rai 10 September 2014

Beautiful write. invite you to read my poem FLOWER IN SNOW.

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Patti Masterman 20 July 2011

The last lines are so lovely. I admit I have been pining for snow in the enormous heat this year. They are calling it a 'heat dome' alas. I would like to get outside of the dome but I guess that is unlikely at best.

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Shadow Girl 04 July 2011

Beautiful - warms my heart! Brings back memories - i haven't seen the snow in 20 years...not much of it here is Australia - SG

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Malaya Roses 26 March 2011

Winter and the feeling about it was written in a smooth way and i like it. Your poem made me cry for winter...lovely white & heavenly snow! ! Excellent.

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