Monday, December 14, 2015

X-Rays Can't See Her Broken Heart Comments

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When her son was in trouble she could feel it in her heart.
Her heart was hurting when her daughter got ready to depart.

When her husband had a stroke she had felt it for some time.
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Arfa Iman Kalera 23 December 2015

Its really a heart touching poem, each verse is full of emotions, Its wonderful, Well done! !

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Spock The Vegan 04 November 2016

Thanks very much Arfa. I appreciate your comment.

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Kim Barney 15 December 2015

Many times medical science can find nothing wrong, but there are people who can always tell something is amiss. Poem is very well done. Reminds me of the guy who had the following engraved on his headstone: See? I told you I was sick.

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Spock The Vegan 04 November 2016

Thanks much Kim. My wife is certainly one of those. Your headstone poems are very good.

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Jim Franckum 14 December 2015

That's a sad poem, but emotional topics make good poetry. Well done!

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Spock The Vegan 04 November 2016

Thanks Jim. Anything that is on your mind makes a poem topic.

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Edmund Strolis 14 December 2015

She had felt it for some time. There are those that pour their heart and soul into trying to keep the ship afloat. Great but sad truths.

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Spock The Vegan 04 November 2016

Thanks for your comment Edmund. You are correct.

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