When her son was in trouble she could feel it in her heart.
Her heart was hurting when her daughter got ready to depart.
When her husband had a stroke she had felt it for some time.
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Many times medical science can find nothing wrong, but there are people who can always tell something is amiss. Poem is very well done. Reminds me of the guy who had the following engraved on his headstone: See? I told you I was sick.
Thanks much Kim. My wife is certainly one of those. Your headstone poems are very good.
That's a sad poem, but emotional topics make good poetry. Well done!
She had felt it for some time. There are those that pour their heart and soul into trying to keep the ship afloat. Great but sad truths.
Its really a heart touching poem, each verse is full of emotions, Its wonderful, Well done! !
Thanks very much Arfa. I appreciate your comment.