Whatever on your page
whenever I just read
there surely find a sage
who has a moral creed
...
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So lovely. I read it twice, and enjoyed each time. Very good.
Shazia, a wonderful inspirational poem and thanks to Aswath Raman too! Enjoyed!
a brilliant write here the entire creation is old like stars n plnets only the Pal ie moment is new n we are getting x ray. beautiful write.
Inspiration comes sometimes from great insights like this poem Thanks for sharing =: OD BB
'Creativity is really a marvel, when it descends upon us, we simply get amazed'...I rejoice in the happiness rendered by your great literary comments, dear Shahzia, ..a real Shah!
An x-ray vision Do the readers need To read what lies Between the lines But too much exposure To the x-rays is ridden With radiation!
Great poem Shahzia, an excellent recommendation for both yourself and Aswath.
Aswath Raman inspiring a fantastic poet like Shahzia Batool! The true credit goes to the poet wizard Aswath and then to these X RAYS...
A good response to a good poem. Sanctity of the site must be maintained.
And this X-ray machine nicely illuminating the world with her waves (poems & aspirations note) ...another audacious poem, nicely penned especially use of sage, decode & connote
X ray I hope about the grasping the things through the naked eyes Now the infirmities of the eyes to see the things to be praise in the manner to be praised All the three stanza nicely depicted the quality of ours, words chosen pearls /.moral creed, wish to connote and boldness and brilliance these three are walking modestly on the poetic pavement for this word Very nice to read to understand thank
this is a very daring attempt with a strong meaningful message and the way you conyeyed, in few words, is brilliant! ! !
good artists have seeing eyes, , , , , , , they can x-ray the within without tampering the without, , , thanx for another nice poem,
Aankhen jab aatish Ghalib ya to phir Fidayin