Wednesday, June 19, 2013

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Whatever on your page
whenever I just read
there surely find a sage
who has a moral creed
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Shahzia Batool
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Allemagne Roßmann 03 July 2013

Aankhen jab aatish Ghalib ya to phir Fidayin

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Walterrean Salley 30 June 2013

So lovely. I read it twice, and enjoyed each time. Very good.

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Heather Wilkins 29 June 2013

beautiful tribute to a writer.

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Lasoaphia Quxazs 27 June 2013

Lovely thought, lovely words, Shahzia, you are lovely.

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Chandra Thiagarajan 25 June 2013

Shazia, a wonderful inspirational poem and thanks to Aswath Raman too! Enjoyed!

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Ramesh Rai 23 June 2013

a brilliant write here the entire creation is old like stars n plnets only the Pal ie moment is new n we are getting x ray. beautiful write.

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Paul Brookes 22 June 2013

Inspiration comes sometimes from great insights like this poem Thanks for sharing =: OD BB

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Yasmin Khan 22 June 2013

'Creativity is really a marvel, when it descends upon us, we simply get amazed'...I rejoice in the happiness rendered by your great literary comments, dear Shahzia, ..a real Shah!

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Wahab Abdul 21 June 2013

a nice tribute... to a poet friend.. cool

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Indira Babbellapati 20 June 2013

An x-ray vision Do the readers need To read what lies Between the lines But too much exposure To the x-rays is ridden With radiation!

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Valerie Dohren 20 June 2013

Great poem Shahzia, an excellent recommendation for both yourself and Aswath.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 20 June 2013

A tribute to a poet! Wow soo lovely n nice sis.

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Dinesan Madathil 20 June 2013

Aswath Raman inspiring a fantastic poet like Shahzia Batool! The true credit goes to the poet wizard Aswath and then to these X RAYS...

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Yasmin Khan 20 June 2013

A nice homage paid to the one who inspired you.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 19 June 2013

A good response to a good poem. Sanctity of the site must be maintained.

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Farah Ilyas 19 June 2013

And this X-ray machine nicely illuminating the world with her waves (poems & aspirations note) ...another audacious poem, nicely penned especially use of sage, decode & connote

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 19 June 2013

X ray I hope about the grasping the things through the naked eyes Now the infirmities of the eyes to see the things to be praise in the manner to be praised All the three stanza nicely depicted the quality of ours, words chosen pearls /.moral creed, wish to connote and boldness and brilliance these three are walking modestly on the poetic pavement for this word Very nice to read to understand thank

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Passionate Reader 19 June 2013

this is a very daring attempt with a strong meaningful message and the way you conyeyed, in few words, is brilliant! ! !

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Kavya . 19 June 2013

wow brilliant! messange nicely decoded and connoted thru a poem

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R.k Das 19 June 2013

good artists have seeing eyes, , , , , , , they can x-ray the within without tampering the without, , , thanx for another nice poem,

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