Thursday, June 16, 2011

X..... Peace Comments

Rating: 5.0

A pregnant coconut tree
Quadruplets about to be born
Through its gently shuffling leaves
Rays of the fast rising sun
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Aufie Zophy
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Joseph Anderson 22 June 2012

Ah! The harmony of nature, what could be better? you laid it all out for us to enjoy. A beauty of a write. Certainly worth a 10

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Rekha Mandagere 23 June 2011

Beautiful imagery, wonderful feelings and love for nature. Well said my friend, peace always rests on the lap of nature. Nice poem.

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Walterrean Salley 18 June 2011

“…and the peace goes on.” Here, we have all breathtaking images of peace—well incorporated to render a fine portrait. Thank you.

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