X-Mas Memoirs Comments

Its X Mas today My darling.. The greatest of the days The Auspicious birthday Of A divine child Off a Virgin mother, An occasion of Chorus From a Billion lips For the revered child... This poepoem is really amazing. Thanks for sharing. 10++++++

The greatest of the days The Auspicious birthday Of A divine child Off a Virgin mother, I appreciate this concept in that line. Thanks for sharing the poem. 10 marks. Thanks

The Auspicious birthday Of A divine child Off a Virgin mother, An occasion of Chorus From a Billion lips For the revered child... Beautiful concept of love, respect and harmony. Love it. 10. Nitu

Had you been in my life Ages Ago, in some Century Lost in the dustbin of past We would have celebrated This moment, Somewhere on a shore By the Sea, Or Beside a table Under the Candle light- In some Hotel or A modern Restaurant, In the fading reflections Of the candle On the droplets of Sweat on our faces, Like the droplets of dew of tears Down the cheeks, In A warm wish and A sweet message For the ensuing New Year! ! ! Beautiful celebration of the x mas and the the birth of Christ. Loved it.10 for it.

A lovely poem commemorating a great day.... the birth of Jesus Christ! I enjoyed the way you have visualized how you would have celebrated this day in the company of your beloved!